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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 2

Describing People

Instructions: Describe six different people, using a positive and negative descriptive word: a woman, a man, a boy, a girl, you and me. Ex. The boy is young and not tall.

Dmitry's submission: Average Rating:
The boy is not fat. He is thin. She is not a girl. She is a woman. The boy is not a man. He is young. The woman is not fat. She is on diet. He is not rich. She is poor. He and she are rich together. She is not old yet. The man is short. The woman is tall. He and she are nice couple.
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  • Ivan.Chocron
    Mochapoints: 1951  |  Teacher Score: 38 (0%)
    5/5, keep it like that!
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  • Vivian
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    You say "She is on a diet" instead of "She is on diet" You say "He and she are a nice couple" instead of "He and she are nice couple" Otherwise, it's really good! Perfect spelling!
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  • Dmitry
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    Vivian, your comments really important for me!
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  • Olesya
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    Hey, good work!Keep doing!
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