English Writing Exercise

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• 2008-11-30 11:14:51

  Laura

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  Very good work! Just look at my variant, please. I went shopping to Bhatbhettni supermarket last Saturday. It was on the 29th of November, 2008. This supermarket is situated in Kathmandu. I bought a jacket and a coat for myself, a pair of trousers for my son and one more jacket for my wife. It cost me 5500NPR.

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• 2008-11-30 11:47:01

  lovely^.^minmin

  

  well done! i went shopping at...,and delete ''on'',it was on November 29th,2008.i paid for my child's clothes which were ...they all cost me 5500NPR.

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• 2008-11-30 12:44:54

  Kriszti

  

  Hi! You don't have to use ig letter at the beginning of the name of the things for example "jacket" or "trousers" /you have to use prular instead of"trouser", because it has got two legs as I remeber well/. "I paid 2000NPR for my child's clothes, 1500 for mine and 2000 for my wife's." Be good BR Kriszti

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• 2008-12-01 09:10:16

  marika

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  I like your describe of shopping. It is very good. I am sure that you all were very happy, because everybody gave some gift. I like your describe of shopping. It is very good. I am sure that you all were very happy, because everybody gave some gift. According me "was" is not necessary in next two sentences: I paid for my child's clothes 2000NPR. All costs of the clothes 5500NPR. And last sentence: Which is equivalent value $85. ...jacket and trouser ... without capital letter

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• 2008-12-01 18:47:11

  mayorci

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  Good job. Follow all these important comments.

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• 2008-12-01 20:11:00

  alyssia keys

  

  Good, but: 'went TO', not 'on' , last Saturday. 'a jacket, some/a pair of trousers. I paid ....2000NPr-without 'WAS' All cost me...

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• 2008-12-18 11:42:51

  lovely^.^minmin

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  Last  time  i  went  shopping  ...on  the  new  year

  ...for  my  child

  I   went  shopping

  It  only  costs  15000Npr,and  not  so  much  for  me

  i  think  the  first  is  better

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• 2008-12-18 13:24:40

  emerald

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  Last New Year's Day, I went shopping with my family at the department store. I bought shirts, trousers, some ladies' clothes and some toys for my child which only cost 2500Npr. During my vacation, I also went on shopping. I bought a pair of suits, a set of clothes for my child and some items for my wife for only 15000Npr. Can you check which is  better?

  "We use best when we're comparing more that 2 objects"

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• 2008-12-18 13:26:37

  emerald

  

   "than"  not "that" sorry for the typographic error.

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• 2008-12-18 15:02:36

  ~Rosie~

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  Last time I went shopping was with my family on new year's day in the supermarket. I bought shirts, trousers and some ladies clothes. I bought some toys for my child. It cost only 2500Npr. I also went shopping during my vacation. It was the time of festival, so I went shopping. I bought a suit for me, a set of clothes for my child and some ladies' items for my wife. It did not cost much, only 15000 Npr. Can you check which is the best.

  Very good!  Just make sure you spell shopping right - soaping means covering with soap!! :)

   

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• 2008-12-18 15:52:24

  mayorci

  

  Good job.

  I went shopping....

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• 2008-12-19 04:30:23

  Argelia

  

  I am sorry but i don´t speak English.

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