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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 6, Lesson 4

A Shopping Trip

Instructions: Write about the last time you went shopping. What were you shopping for? What did you buy? Who did you go with?

Asha Singh's submission: Average Rating:
My favourite city is Brazil. In north of it is Suriname,Guyana,Venezuela etc.In the south of it is Paraguay, Uruguay etc. east of it is Atlantic ocean. West of it is Bolivia,Peru,Columbia,Ecuador.
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  • melpupo
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    Brazil is not a city! It is a country... But, it's nice to know that you like Brazil!
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  • andreea.balaban
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    My favourite city is Brazil. In the north side of it is Suriname,Guyana,Venezuela etc.In the south of it is Paraguay, Uruguay etc. east of it is the Atlantic ocean. West of it is Bolivia,Peru,Columbia,Ecuador. I think you thought about the countries, which can be found around Brazil. In the exercise you were asked to say which cities can be found, but it is ok. (-:
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  • carolinacanavel
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  • carolinacanavel
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    HI. ALTHOUGHT MY ENGLISH IS NOT GOOD I WILL TRY TO HELP YOU WITH MY LITTLE KNOWLEDGE ABOUT THIS LANGUAGE. BRAZIL IS A COUNTRY!!!BE CAREFUL WITH THE QUESTION!!!BUT YOUR DESCRIPTION IS GOOD.
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