Going on Vacation
Instructions:
Describe a vacation you are taking. When and where are you going? What are you going to do?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 1
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Twelfth day of December be on holiday.I travel to beach, bathe at sea and enjoy boating.
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Keep it up.
Better to say : On / from 12th December I WILL BE on holiday. I WILL travel to beach, swim / bath at Sea and ejoy boating.
You have to focus your spellings..!
Your spelling is fine. *~ashish~* is incorrect. There are some small grammatical problems which I have corrected below. You are doing very well.
mdchaskar is ALSO incorrect. He is not using 'articles' and he is incorrectly capitalising 'proper nouns' (Sea). Be careful from whom you request advise! rsrs
On the twelfth day of December I will be on holiday.I will travel to the beach, and bathe at swim in the sea and enjoy some boating.