Going Shopping
Instructions:
Describe the last time you went shopping. What did you buy? How much did it cost?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 4
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The last time I went shopping yesterday morning (that was Saturday but this information seems not to change anyting, let's focuse on what I bought). I made a list of all things I needed but as usual I bought something completely different (when I saw my favourite flowers: daffodils and tulips I couldn't just resist, the price wasn't important). It wasn't matter that my fridge was almost empty, but hey, human beings need something more than just food.
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cristianaMochapoints: 649 | Teacher Score: 235 (0%)Submitted over a year agoSpelling: -
cristianaMochapoints: 649 | Teacher Score: 235 (0%)
'The last time I went shopping was yesterday morning.' instead of 'The last time I went shopping yesterday morning.' 'It did not matter that my fridge was almost empty...' instead of 'It wasn't matter that my fridge...' Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
joannaMochapoints: 6292 | Teacher Score: 1381 (100%)many thanks cristiana Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
GilgyMochapoints: 146818 | Teacher Score: 141908 (99%)but this information doesn't seem to change anything. Let's focus I made a list of all [the] things I needed I just couldn't resist No matter that my frige was almost empty, hey, human beings need Submitted over a year agoTranslate
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