What are people doing?
Instructions:
Using both positive and negative characteristics, describe what six people are doing: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. I am eating food at the table. I am not sleeping in bed.
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 3
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I am studing inglish in my house.I am wearing red a t-shirt, blue a skirt and white a shocks.
I am not wearing a coat because here it is not cold. o here do not cold?
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frankieMochapoints: 3889 | Teacher Score: 711 (0%)Submitted over a year agoSpelling: -
frankieMochapoints: 3889 | Teacher Score: 711 (0%)
Muy Bien, sòlo algunas correcciones. I am STUDYING (study+ing) english in my house. I am wearing a red t-shirt, blue skirt and white socks. I am not wearing a coat because here it is not cold. Very good. Hasta luego. Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
nickpedMochapoints: 1144 | Teacher Score: 55 (0%)Submitted over a year agoSpelling: -
CarlMochapoints: 936 | Teacher Score: 115 (0%)Submitted over a year agoSpelling: -
CarlMochapoints: 936 | Teacher Score: 115 (0%)
I have made some corrections: I am studying English in my house. I am wearing a red t-shirt, a blue skirt and white socks. I am not wearing a coat because it is not cold here. English is spelt with an E, and always has a capital letter. Excellent work : ) Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
James KimMochapoints: 1410 | Teacher Score: 13 (0%)My country have four seasons. And we need many kinds of clothes. So I must spend much money to buy clothes. Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
silent_orchestr...Mochapoints: 343 | Teacher Score: 115 (0%)Submitted over a year agoSpelling: -
silent_orchestr...Mochapoints: 343 | Teacher Score: 115 (0%)
There are some mistakes need to be taken care of at the beginner level.your first sentence should be"I am studying English in my home.I am wearing a red T-shirt,a blue skirt and a pair of socks."I don't understand what u want to say in the sentence"o here do not cold?" Don't get disheartened by whatever I wrote but I think you need to work on these points. Thanks Submitted over a year agoTranslate
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