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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 1

Describing your day

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson describe your day. What time is it now? What time was it 20 minutes ago? What time did you wake up this morning? What time will you go to bed?

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Please I want a cofe, with one piece the banana pye, then I want a coca cola. Thanks.
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  • salutlemonde
    Mochapoints: 28956  |  Teacher Score: 10460 (86%)

    I would like a cup of coffee with one piece of banana pie, please. Then, I would like a glass of coca cola. Thanks.

    would like = quiera. It's more polite if you're ordering something. want = quiero so someone would still understand you.

    This is probably closer to what you would say to order food, "A coffe with a piece of banana pie, then a Coke, please."
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  • Liliana
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    Thanks for you advice and help me !!!!

    Liliana

     
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