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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 5, Lesson 4

Describing Objects, Animals, and People

Instructions: Use the new adjectives from this lesson to describe the activities of six objects, animals, and people. EX. The old, heavy elephant is sitting in a clean, quiet place.

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the elephant is old and heavy, It is sitting in a place clean and quiet.
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  • Ana Paula
    Mochapoints: 5546  |  Teacher Score: 272 (0%)

    good!
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  • Ina
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    The elephant is old and heavy. It is sitting in a clean and quiet place.

     

    good, but a bit short, try to write a bit more
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