Describing People
Instructions:
Describe six different people, using a positive and negative descriptive word: a woman, a man, a boy, a girl, you and me. Ex. The boy is young and not tall.
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 2
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My mother has a long hair,my father is tall .
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You should say " My mother has long hair, my father is tall. You do not need an "a" before long.
You only did one person, so do more. I think you will do well. Just do more work.
Try to describe more. See the above example. Another example: The woman is not white. She is black. Try again. OK
that is a good sentence and is gramatically correct. however, those two statements are different from eachother. since they are seperate, most people would put an and after the comma or put them as two different sentences. putting an "and" would look like this: "My mother has long hair, and my father is tall."
putting them as two seperate sentences would be "My mother has long hair. My father is tall."
it was good and you achieved what they told you to do