Describe your street
Instructions:
Look outside of your window and describe the movement that is happening on your street. Which direction are the people and the cars moving? How would a guest reach your home from the street?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 201, Unit 7, Lesson 2
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I have a lot of favorite restaurants in town but first of all i wanna say most important one that is rather fashionable and it's kind of persian restaurant. If you wanna go there, you should be starving because they have delicious food and their porsion's are much more than others. I don't wanna say what it name is becase i dislike to make a commercial. You accross the Horton Plaza, you go straight ahead. You can see after two blocks. There is a italian restaurant next to it and if you across the street you can see rock cafe right there. Actually, there are many kinds of restaurant in town and you just decide what kind of food you like. Sometimes, some people arrange parties for their friends,birthday,organization etc. How about prices, i think, it costs an arm and a leg. But you never forgot this, don't postpone favorite things in your life. Life is short...And food is the the real of our life. Bye for now everybody.
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I have a lot of favorite restaurants in town but first of all I wanna [mention the] most important one [which] is rather fashionable and [is] kind of [a] [P]ersian restaurant. If you wanna go there, you should be starving because they have delicious food and their por[t]ion's are much [larger] than others. I don't wanna say what [its] name is beca[u]se I dislike [making it] a commercial. You [Go] a[c]ross the Horton Plaza you [and] go straight ahead. You can see [it] after two blocks. There is a[n] [I]talian restaurant next to it[,] and if you across the street you can see [a] rock cafe right there. Actually, there are many kinds of restaurant[s] in town and you [can] just decide what kind of food you like. Sometimes, some people arrange parties for their friends,birthday[s],organization[s] etc. How About prices, I think it costs an arm and a leg. But you never forg[e]t this, don't postpone [your] favorite things in your life. Life is short...And food is the the real [meat]of our [lives]. Bye for now everybody.