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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 5

Describe Your Home Tools

Instructions: List some tools that you have at home. What are they? Where did you buy them? How often do you use them? What was the last tool you used and why?

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Today is December 16th. Weather is clear but little cold. Tomorrow will be rainy.
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  • Nazgul
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    Well done!!!

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  • fouallier
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    in fact, "is going to be" instead of "will be" might be better, because you are talking about a near future in which you already know the sky is going to be rainy.

    "I will travel to Australia one day or another".

    "I am going to buy a new game device next week"

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  • Elisquel
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    well done!

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  • anne
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    go on!

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  • *j*
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    Hi Lísias. No entiendo algunos comentarios anteriores sobre este ejercico tuyo, (infact, instead of, I will travel to Australia....? ¿what are they talking about? ¿De que estan hablando?)....!¡

    Your exercise about the weather:

    The weather is clear but a little cold.

    Short, but fine.

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  • jejelen
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    very good and good work

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