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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 1

Introduce yourself

Instructions: Introduce yourself. Tell us your name, how you are doing, where you are from, where you live, where you work, etc.

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she is a women,she is rich,she is old,she is fat.
Submitted over a year ago

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  • ResidentX
    Mochapoints: 2799  |  Teacher Score: 2348 (100%)
    She is an old, fat, rich woman.
    Submitted over a year ago
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  • jennifer
    Mochapoints: 4088  |  Teacher Score: 1702
    Yes, the comment below on your statement is correct. But, if you want to be more kind, you won't call someone fat or old. You might say, "She is an older, large woman who is very rich." That would definitely be nicer!
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  • Malcan
    Mochapoints: 3703  |  Teacher Score: 1938 (100%)
    Another way to describe this friend is: "I have a lady friend who is old and wealthy."
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  • Awen
    Mochapoints: 14677  |  Teacher Score: 13959 (0%)
    Most people do not like being called old and fat.
    Submitted over a year ago
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