Your last vacation
Instructions:
Describe your last vacation. Where did you most recently visit on holiday? What activities and attractions can you recommend to other travelers?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 5
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In went Pokhara with my family in my last Vacation in Auguest 2008. Pokhara is one of the beautiful place of Nepal. The major attractions of this place are to view of mount Fishtail and Dhaulagiri which are above 8,000 hight. Not only Fewa lake but other 7 lakes are well known to all visitors. Other sites are Mahendra cave and Guptashore Cave. our family visited all these places and enjoyed a lot. Finally, I recommend to other vacationers to visit Pokhara and Annapurna Trekking Route (which is world's 10 th famous places to visit once lifetime). To conclude Pokhara and Mount Everest (trekk to KalaPather-height 5530 mt) are the famous places to spent vaccation.
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I went...on my last vacation in August...Pokhara is one of the most beautiful places of Nepal. .......of this place are the view of ....these are more than 8,000 tall.............other 7 lakes are well known by all visitors. Other sights are...
........vacation
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OK, but:
'to go to, went to, gone to'
'August'
wither 'is a beautiful place'or 'is one of the most beautiful place'
'the view of...'
'once in a lifetime'
'vacation'.
PS. I hope one day can visit the places you mentioned above. Nice description.