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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 1

Going on Vacation

Instructions: Describe a vacation you are taking. When and where are you going? What are you going to do?

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If i am goning to vacation so i want to england.and to make friends.
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  • Jerry
    Mochapoints: 2655  |  Teacher Score: 904 (100%)

    If i am goning to go on vacation so i want to go to england.and to make friends.

    You could also write "If I am going on vacation, I want to go to England to make friends" which may be simplier than the changes I made :)

    Great job!!

     

     

     
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