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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 2

Describing People

Instructions: Describe six different people, using a positive and negative descriptive word: a woman, a man, a boy, a girl, you and me. Ex. The boy is young and not tall.

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The woman is not young.She is old, The man is not poor. He is rich, The boy is not tall.He is short, The girl is not fat.She is thin, You are a girl .I am a boy.
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  • rachelann
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    good job! just be sure to use proper punctuation.

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  • Linda Lorenzo
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    Very good!

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  • Joanna B
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    Excellent- you just need to change your punctuation. For example:

    "The woman is not young, she is old."

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  • Simplismente, L...
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    Esta bom, mas da proxima podemos falar um pouco mais de cada um...

    Mas continue assim esta no caminho certo..

    bjim

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  • Helena Miranda
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    Está muito bom.Mas preste mais atenção na pontuação. Ok?

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  • Grazia
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    Está ótimo!!! Parabéns!

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  • Sandy
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    Very good!

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  • alse
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    :) good

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