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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 4

Describing People and Objects

Instructions: Describe people and objects, including both singular and plural forms. Use both positive and negative statements. Ex. We are women. We are not men. This is a gold coin. These are not yellow flowers.

Alvaro Antônio's submission: Average Rating:
These are not gold coins, these are silvers.This is a red flower ,it is not purple. The man and his wallet ,the woman and her purse. A woman and a car , a man and a wallet . We are men and they are women.
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  • Marília
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    Very good! Everything's correct!
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  • Judy
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    very good, only a mistake:

    ..."these are silver."
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  • civciv
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    hi,

    you don't have a mistake except "silvers", but it would be better if you used positive and negative attributes wirh the sentences following the first sentence as the exercise suggests.

    good work.
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  • L*
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    Hello!

    These are not gold coins. These are silver coins.

    This flower is red. It is not purple.

    Good!
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