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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 1

Describing your day

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson describe your day. What time is it now? What time was it 20 minutes ago? What time did you wake up this morning? What time will you go to bed?

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It was the day before yestoday.I went to the cafe near our school with my best friends for her birthday.There were all kinds of food and drink in the cafe.I ordered a piece of pie and a glass of beer which is my favorite.She only ordered a icecream.we wear so happy!
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    It was the day before yesterday.I went to the cafe near our school with my best friends for her birthday.There were all kinds of foods and drinks in the cafe.I ordered a piece of pie and a glass of beer, which is my favorite. She only ordered an icecream.We wear  were so happy!

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