Describe Your Home Tools
Instructions:
List some tools that you have at home. What are they? Where did you buy them? How often do you use them? What was the last tool you used and why?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 5
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Today it is the 23th Dezember. It was 2pm for a few minutes and it is dark outside. It isn´t as cold as a normal winter. But is it windy.
Today I thing it would be raining a bit and maybe we will get 6 degrees. However the weather forecast says it should be snowing by tomorrow evening. So we will see or we will have a look.
Today I thing it would be raining a bit and maybe we will get 6 degrees. However the weather forecast says it should be snowing by tomorrow evening. So we will see or we will have a look.
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"Today it is the 23th of Dezember December."
I'm not sure what you mean by "It was 2pm for a few minutes"...Do you mean it was 2pm a few minutes ago?
But is it it is windy.
Today I thing think it would be will raining a bit and maybe we will get 6 degrees.
"So we will see or we will have a look./ So we will see or we will have a look."
They mean the same thing, so you only need one.
Caitlin touched on pretty much everything. The only thing I might reword is:
"and maybe it will reach 6 degrees."
Use a comma after however:
However, the weather forecast....
The only thing I noticed is -- it is correct to say the 23rd -- not 23th.
Other than that, I agree with the others. Good work.