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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 2

Describe People

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe what six people (a man and a woman, he and she, you and I) are doing at this moment and what they did some time ago. Ex: The woman is opening the door. The woman opened the door an hour ago.

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It was sunday yesterday,the weather was fine.I went to the park that is the best one here in suburb with my friends.There is a square of field for pingpong,which made me so happy!So I played the pingpong with one of my friends from 10:00am to 1:00pm there.There is a library at the park also.But I was too tired to read books,and the pingpong was enough for me,I didn't want to do anything at all.There is an old saying in China,it is "Excess is the same as not get"(过犹不及).
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  • TJ
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    that was so good

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  • t020253
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    It was sunday yesterday and the weather was fine.I went to the park that is the best one here in suburb with my friends.There is a square of field for pingpong,which made me so happy!So I played the pingpong with one of my friends from 10:00am to 1:00pm there.There is a library at the park also.But I was too tired to read books,and the pingpong was enough for me.I didn't want to do anything at all.There is an old saying in China.It is "Excess is the same as not ENOUGH"(过犹不及).

    Submitted over a year ago

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