Going on Vacation
Instructions:
Describe a vacation you are taking. When and where are you going? What are you going to do?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 1
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Next year, in summer, I'm going to stay 3 months in a family in London. I'm going to help them, taking care their 2 little children, tidying up the house, cooking etc. Maybe I'll go to my uncle's house too, he lives in Madrid. I'll stay maybe 1 month or something like this. I think it'll be a wonderful holiday :)
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with a family in London.
too; he lives in Madrid.
cooking, etc.
something like that would be more common
Next summer, I'm going to stay with a family in London for 3 months. I'm giong to help them, taking care of their 2 little children.
Looks pretty good keep practicing.
Very good. Here are my suggestions:
Next year, in the summer, I'm going to stay 3 months in with a family in London. I'm going to help them by taking care of their 2 little children, housecleaning ( tidying up the house is okay), cooking, etc. Maybe I'll go to my uncle's house too. He lives in Madrid. I'll stay with him for maybe 1 month or something like this. I think it'll be a wonderful holiday :)
ı think you must use 'for' between 'stay' and '3'
I'm going to stay 3 months with my family in London