Describing People
Instructions:
Describe six different people, using a positive and negative descriptive word: a woman, a man, a boy, a girl, you and me. Ex. The boy is young and not tall.
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 2
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i am a girl.i am not a boy.i am not short. i am tall. i am not old ,i am young.
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BurtMochapoints: 5781 | Teacher Score: 4918 (100%)I am glad you are not a boy. Otherwise your hair would be too long. :) Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
tagMochapoints: 18156 | Teacher Score: 14978 (0%)Submitted over a year agoSpelling: -
tagMochapoints: 18156 | Teacher Score: 14978 (0%)
GOOD, Iam a girl.Iam not a boy.Iam not short.I am tall. I am not old .I am young. Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
ResidentXMochapoints: 2799 | Teacher Score: 2348 (100%)I am a girl not a boy. I am tall not short. I'm young not old. Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
Don.......傅堂诺Mochapoints: 9827 | Teacher Score: 5207 (0%)Submitted over a year agoSpelling: -
Don.......傅堂诺Mochapoints: 9827 | Teacher Score: 5207 (0%)
Hello xiaobai. I would not use so many periods in your sentence, you may try a different approach. And remember to capitalize "I" when using it by itself. I am a girl, I am not a boy. I am not short, I am tall and I am not old, I am young. Keep practicing :-)))) Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
AdamMochapoints: 2938 | Teacher Score: 2262 (0%)Not bad, not bad. I would re-write the sentence, however to say something like this: "I am a young, tall girl." The rest is implicit in that statement :) If you like music, you might like to hear me play: http://myspace.com/woodkerne Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
MalcanMochapoints: 3703 | Teacher Score: 1938 (100%)" I am a tall young girl." Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
AwenMochapoints: 14677 | Teacher Score: 13959 (0%)Keep practicing. Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
babylionMochapoints: 762 | Teacher Score: 280 (0%)I agree with Malcan Submitted over a year agoTranslate
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