English Writing Exercise

Describing People

Using both a positive and a negative characteristic, describe six different people: a woman, a man, a boy, a girl, you and me. Ex. The man is not rich. He is poor.

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faith
i am a girl.i am not a boy.i am not short. i am tall. i am not old ,i am young.




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Submitted: 2008-04-24 05:37:45




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  • 2008-02-28 05:43:50
    Burt
    I am glad you are not a boy. Otherwise your hair would be too long. :)
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  • 2008-02-28 06:36:08
    tag
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  • 2008-02-28 06:36:12
    tag
    GOOD, Iam a girl.Iam not a boy.Iam not short.I am tall. I am not old .I am young.
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  • 2008-02-28 14:34:17
    ResidentX
    I am a girl not a boy. I am tall not short. I'm young not old.
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  • 2008-02-29 00:44:45
    Don.......傅堂诺
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  • 2008-02-29 00:45:02
    Don.......傅堂诺
    Hello xiaobai. I would not use so many periods in your sentence, you may try a different approach. And remember to capitalize "I" when using it by itself. I am a girl, I am not a boy. I am not short, I am tall and I am not old, I am young. Keep practicing :-))))
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  • 2008-03-01 00:23:13
    Adam
    Not bad, not bad. I would re-write the sentence, however to say something like this: "I am a young, tall girl." The rest is implicit in that statement :) If you like music, you might like to hear me play: http://myspace.com/woodkerne
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  • 2008-03-01 15:52:25
    Malcan
    " I am a tall young girl."
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  • 2008-04-23 20:19:22
    Awen
    Keep practicing.
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  • 2008-04-24 05:37:45
    babylion
    I agree with Malcan
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