Describing Objects
Instructions:
Describe a set of objects on a table. Describe another set of objects in a box. EX. The flowers are on the table, and the candy is in the box.
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 1
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The sweets are in the box. There are the vase with flowers on the table. The man is in the chair at the table, but his wallet is on the table. The teenagers are dancing on the table.
Pens and pencils are in yellow box. There are a lot of boxes in a post office. The little car is in the large box.
There are boxes on the table.
Pens and pencils are in yellow box. There are a lot of boxes in a post office. The little car is in the large box.
There are boxes on the table.
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An excellent effort! Some 'minor' mistakes:
The sweets are in the box. There is a vase with flowers in on the table. The man is in the chair at the table, but his wallet is on the table. The teenagers are dancing on the table. Pens and pencils are in the yellow box. There are a lot of boxes in a post office. The little car is in the large box. There are boxes on the table.
Павел,
Отличная работа. Маленькие ошибки:
1. There is a vase... единственное число
2. The pens and pencils are in the (или а) yellow box
3. There are a lot of boxes at the post office
Эд
Well done, after pronouns we put the : on the table, at the door
there is a box...
there is sugar...
there are matches...
great
Very good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!