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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 2

Describing People

Instructions: Describe six different people, using a positive and negative descriptive word: a woman, a man, a boy, a girl, you and me. Ex. The boy is young and not tall.

Pavel Barma's submission: Average Rating:
The old man is not rich he is poor. The young girl is not tall she is short. The old woman is not strong. The man is more tall then the boy. The man is more strong than the woman. Young woman is not thin she is fat. The boy is not tall he is short.
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  • Athlete61
    Mochapoints: 21503  |  Teacher Score: 19054 (100%)

    Павел,

    Очень хорошо! Маленькие ошибки

    1. The man is taller than the boy

    2. then = потом, than = чем

    3. The man is stronger than the woman

    4. The young woman...

    Эд

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  • bogunja
    Mochapoints: 2390  |  Teacher Score: 103 (0%)

    tall, small, high - 1 syllable, that`s why we make taller, the tallest

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  • cdoura
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    Good job a few mistakes, u would use than in stead of then.

    The man is taller than the boy

    The man is stronger than the woman

    The young woman

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  • mrlampp
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    well done!

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  • Leonardo
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     Athlete's comments is very good!!!!

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