Describing the weather
Instructions:
Describe the weather for five days, and explain what different people need for that weather. Ex. Today it is raining, and it is cold. The woman needs a raincoat and an umbrella.
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 3
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Yesterday it was windy and I needed a scarf or I would get ill. Today is quiet warm, I need some sunglasses. My mom is going to Madrid next week, the forecast said that there it's going to be really hot, so she will need the swimsuit. Last week it rained a lot so I took the umbrella when I went out.
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Yesterday as it was windy and I needed a scarf otherwise I would get ill. Today it is quiet warm, I need some sunglasses. My mom is going to Madrid next week. The forecast said that it's going to be really hot there, so she will need her swimsuit. Last week it rained a lot so I took the umbrella when I went out.
some suggestions
quite warm
her or a swimsuit
it's going to be really hot there,
very good!
"Yesterday it was windy and I needed a scarf, or I would get sick. Today it is quiet warm, I need some sunglasses. My mom is going to Madrid next week, the forecast said that there, it is going to be really hot, so she will need a swimsuit. Last week it rained a lot so I took the umbrella when I went out."
I agree with Drache Ritter. Ottimo lavoro :)