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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 4

Describing Hairstyles

Instructions: Using both positive and negative characteristics, describe the hairstyles of six people: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The young girl does not have short hair. She has long hair.

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The woman does not have short hair. She has a long hair. The man does not have long hair. He has short hair. The girl does not have straight hair. She has curly hair. The boy does not have long hair. He has short brown hair. You does not have long gray hair. You have long black hair. I does not have curly black hair. I have short black hair.
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  • Arvonius
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    The woman does not have short hair. She has a long hair. The man does not have long hair. He has short hair. The girl does not have straight hair. She has curly hair. The boy does not have long hair. He has short brown hair. You do es not have long gray hair. You have long black hair. I do es not have curly black hair. I have short black hair.

    Well done, Jack w! No problems here. Just check on the two points that I crossed out.

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