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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 3

My occupation

Instructions: Using the vocabulary from this lesson, please describe your occupation. What do you do? Do you like what you do? How long have you been working in this field? Did you always want to be in this occupation?

Jesus Rivera's submission: Average Rating:
The day's independence is a great day, where many people celebrate
and enjoy. the name is day independence. on February 27th.
Four days.
Submitted over a year ago

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  • Peejay
    Mochapoints: 9296  |  Teacher Score: 6558 (99%)

    I rewrote what I think you were trying to say.

    The name of the holiday is Independence Day, it starts on February 27th and lasts four days.  It is a great time as many people celebrate and enjoy themselves.
    Submitted over a year ago
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