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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 7, Lesson 2

Describe your street

Instructions: Look outside of your window and describe the movement that is happening on your street. Which direction are the people and the cars moving? How would a guest reach your home from the street?

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There is a good restaurant near my school.i like it so much ,because there will get ready for delicious food which will be affordable but of very high quality.it is a supermarket just opposites the street .and there is a florist next to my favorite restaurant.
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  • tim gorichanaz
    Mochapoints: 1231  |  Teacher Score: 134 (0%)

    OK job, but it could be a little cleaner. Here's what sounds better:

    There is a good restaurant near my school. I like it so much because they prepare delicious food that's cheap, but high quality. There is a supermarket just across the street, and there is a florist next to my favorite restaurant.

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