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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 5

Your last vacation

Instructions: Describe your last vacation. Where did you most recently visit on holiday? What activities and attractions can you recommend to other travelers?

francis's submission: Average Rating:
The last place i vacationed was my home.The New Year,2009,has come to us and i spent the holiday with my family,singing and dancing and chatting with foreign friends on net.My suggestion is not to go out in winter,for it is very cold in Northeast China.
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  • dstagg
    Mochapoints: 10853  |  Teacher Score: 3268

    Always capitalize "I".

    ...come to us(,) and I spent...

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