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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 3

Describing the weather

Instructions: Describe the weather for five days, and explain what different people need for that weather. Ex. Today it is raining, and it is cold. The woman needs a raincoat and an umbrella.

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Different areas have different climate,and that is one of the reasons why the world has biodiversity and people have different daily necessiyies.

In my hometown, it is winter now and it has become very cold.we need thick clothes and goats.But things are quite interesting:in the northern part it is cold with dry,while the eastern ares is wet,so we need umbrella,too.Someone may wear booth.

On the contrary,continents like Australia and south America are in summer now.So they can enjoy the sunshine and they need sunscreen. In some areas near the sea,the mediterranean climate makes coastal zone warm and wet,so people need shirt,blouse and cap.

But I think what we need most to adapt to the weather is enjoying it and doing anything we can to prevent the global warmming.Then everything goes well.
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  • rocaroco
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    Hi, friend...

    Good Job

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