Your last vacation
Instructions:
Describe your last vacation. Where did you most recently visit on holiday? What activities and attractions can you recommend to other travelers?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 5
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I traveled to Buenos Aires, Bariloche and Santiago. Buenos Aires is a wonderful city! I felt like in europe! I did not like to sky, but their alfajores are magnific! Lovely places
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I traveled to Buenos Aires, Bariloche and Santiago. Buenos Aires is a wonderful city! I felt like I was in Europe! I did not like the sky, but their alfajores are magnificent! They were lovely places!
Overall this is a very good piece of writing, you just missed out one or two things.
'I felt like I was in Europe!'
To 'feel like' is the verb you're looking for here - like you had the sense you were in Europe, which has a capital letter. And then you need to say what you feel like - like you were in Europe.
'I did not like the sky.'
I think this is what you meant here. Watch out for arcticles. (Articles = 'the', 'a', 'an').
'Their alfajores are magnificent! They were lovely places!'
You missed off a bit of the word 'magnificent' here - and just saying 'lovely places' would be okay in speech but in writing it's incomplete and you need a verb to make it clearer what you mean.
This is great stuff - keep it up! :)
Aww a cute response. Here's my correction, but the other users did a great job correcting too.
Last summer, I traveled to Buenos Aires, Bariloche, and Santiago. Buenos Aires is a wonderful city! It felt like I was in europe! I did not like to sky ski , but their alfajores are magnificent! Buenos Aires, Bariloche, and Santiago are lovely places to visit.
I traveled to Buenos Aires, Bariloche and Santiago. Buenos Aires is a wonderful city. It felts like I was in Europe! I don't like to ski but their Alfajores are magnificient. Those places are lovely.