Describing Objects
Instructions:
Using one positive and one negative statement, describe six objects (a car, a flower, a coin, a tree, a house, a purse). Ex. The house is black. It is not white.
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 3
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i have a house,it is new,it's yellow.the before door is green,it isn't yard.it have many folewers before the house.
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KZMochapoints: 2381 | Teacher Score: 1620Submitted over a year agoSpelling: -
KZMochapoints: 2381 | Teacher Score: 1620
Instead of saying "it is new, it's yellow", you can combine them e.g. "it is new and yellow". "Before door" should be "front door". "It isn't yard" - better to say "it doesn't have a yard. Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
kerMochapoints: 19 | Teacher Score: 15 (0%)how about this: I have a new house which is painted in yellow and the front door is green. It doesn't have a yard but has many flowers infront of the house. We mostly use the word before when we refer to dates... ^_~ Good luck... I always say practice makes perfect! Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
ResidentXMochapoints: 2799 | Teacher Score: 2348 (100%)I have a new yellow house with a green door with many flowers in front of it. Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
ResidentXMochapoints: 2799 | Teacher Score: 2348 (100%)
I have a new yellow house with a green front door and many flowers in the front yard. Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
x3mMochapoints: 430 | Teacher Score: 155 (0%)"I have a house. My house is new and yellow. The front door is green. There is no yard. I have many flowers planted in front of the house." Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
Don.......傅堂诺Mochapoints: 9827 | Teacher Score: 5207 (0%)Submitted over a year agoSpelling: -
Don.......傅堂诺Mochapoints: 9827 | Teacher Score: 5207 (0%)
Hello Faith. Let me start out by saying this submission refers to the past. All these comments that you are getting are referring to the present. So I will write how it should be in "past tense". My house was new. It was yellow and the door was green. It did not have a yard, but it had many flowers in front of the house. If you need more help with the "tenses" (past, present, and future) please contact me :-)))) Keep up the hard work. Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
SONGJIMochapoints: 590 | Teacher Score: 15 (0%)
this sounds a little better if you say. I have a yellow house with a green door,in the front of the house there are many flowers. Submitted over a year agoTranslate
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