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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 6

Professions

Instructions: Describe the professions of four people: a woman, a man, you and me. Use both positive and negative sentences. Ex. I am a student. The man is a doctor; he is not a teacher.

Micael Andrade's submission: Average Rating:
the woman is a teacher . she is not a nurse
the man is a bus driver, he is not a doctor.
You are not poor, because you are a manager
I am a student, i am not a mailman
Submitted over a year ago

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  • Lidiya
    Mochapoints: 4523  |  Teacher Score: 2794 (100%)

    The woman is a teacher . She is not a nurse. The man is a bus driver, he is not a doctor. You are not poor  because you are a manager. I am a student, I am not a mailman.

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  • Obiwan
    Mochapoints: 11053  |  Teacher Score: 1758

    good job~ 

    ' the -> The '   It's better.

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  • Extreme
    Mochapoints: 11615  |  Teacher Score: 3168 (100%)

    Bom trabalho, Micael!

    Mas não se esqueça de usar letras maiúsculas qdo necessário: no início dos parágrafos, após ponto final...

    The woman is a teacher. She is not a nurse. The man is a bus driver. He is not a doctor. You are not poor, because you're a manager. I am a student. I am not a mailman.

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  • mavin
    Mochapoints: 2791  |  Teacher Score: 646 (0%)

    The woman is a teacher . She is not a nurse. The man is a bus driver, he is not a doctor. You are not poor,  because you are a manager. I am a student. I am not a mailman.

    Submitted over a year ago
  • Ryan Smith
    Mochapoints: 50140  |  Teacher Score: 33307 (100%)

    The woman is a teacher. She is not a nurse. The man is a bus driver. He is not a doctor. You are not poor, because you are a manager. I am a student. I am not a mailman.

    Great!

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