Professions
Instructions:
Describe the professions of four people: a woman, a man, you and me. Use both positive and negative sentences. Ex. I am a student. The man is a doctor; he is not a teacher.
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 6
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I am a student, but i work as a secretary.
My mother is a nurse, she isn't a teacher.
The man who lives next to school is a teacher, and him son is a student.
My father is a police officer.
Those men are doctors, they aren't mechanics.
My mother is a nurse, she isn't a teacher.
The man who lives next to school is a teacher, and him son is a student.
My father is a police officer.
Those men are doctors, they aren't mechanics.
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and HIS son is a student
It's a good text, but you have only one mistake.. is his, no him. Him is a demonstrative pronoum.