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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 5

Describing Objects

Instructions: Describe the objects you learned about in this lesson. Use both positive and negative characteristics to explain what they are like. Ex. There are five buildings. Two buildings are green. Three buildings are not green. They are black.

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Five buildings. Tow green buildings. Three buildings are not green.
There building is bluck.

I have a car. My car is white. My car is not black.
I have a white car.Your car is not white. Your car is red.

My cellphone is pink. Your cellphone is not pink.
Your cellphone is purple.
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    One flower. Two dogs. Three trees. Four cars. Six boys. Seven men. Eight buildings are not brown, they are green. Nine flowers are not red, they are yellow flowers. Ten cats are not black, they are white cats. Eleven candles are not long, they are short. Twelve trees are not green, they are orange. There are thirteen cars. There are fourteen yellow flowers. Fifteen young girls.

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