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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 1

Going on Vacation

Instructions: Describe a vacation you are taking. When and where are you going? What are you going to do?

brona's submission: Average Rating:
So I'm going to visit and take photos of the most famouse Japane's cities.
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  • raab
    Mochapoints: 18495  |  Teacher Score: 7649 (0%)

    It's "famous" and "Japanese" and it would be more colloquial to write "...I'll take photos..."
    Submitted over a year ago
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