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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 6, Lesson 1

What can and can’t they do?

Instructions: Write a list of rules using the vocabulary from this lesson. EX. 1. You can’t smoke in the park. 2. You can park at the restaurant but not at the library.

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You can park, but you can't smoke here. You can't buy some bananas in the restaurant, but you cant buy them only in the supermarket.
He can hear, but he can't talk. He can't open the door, but he can ring the bell. You can order him your dinner.
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  • clairemagnolia
    Mochapoints: 2832  |  Teacher Score: 109 (0%)

    Hi Brona, this is mostly excellent, but a few comments for you:

    1.We would say: You can't buy bananas in the restaurant.

    Not "some bananas".

     

    2.You can only buy them in the supermarket.

    "Buy them only" doesn't sound right.

    3."You can order him your dinner"

    I can't understand this one. Did you want to say: "You can order your dinner from him" or "You can order his dinner for him"?

    Apart from that, it is great.

    :-)

    Claire

    Submitted over a year ago
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