English Writing Exercise Describe your best friend
Instructions:
Describe your best friend using the vocabulary words from this lesson. What does he or she look like? Does he or she have a unique feature? Do you and your friend have similar features? Ex: My friend has blue eyes and broad shoulders. I do not have blue eyes; I have green eyes.
Hello Antonio!
Good job!
For'' preparing '' this food etc...
In Guatemala the people make "chuchitos". For preparing this food you need cornmeal mixed with lard, and tomato sauce with spices. You need pieces of chicken or pork. You put the ingredients in corncob leaves, tie, boil and when ready, you taste a delicius typical food from Guatemala with a cup of coffee. Enjoy your meal. Good Bye friends
TO PREPARE this food, you need cornmeal, mixed with lard, AND tomato sauce with spices.
You put the ingredients in corncob leaves, tie, boil, and THEY'RE ready. You THEN CAN taste a deliciOUs typical food from Guatemala with a cup of coffee.
Excellent writing! Keep up the good work!
good work
In Guatemala the people make "chuchitos." To Prepare this food this food, you need cornmeal mixed with lard, tomato sauce and spices. You need pieces of chicken or pork. You put the ingredients in corncob leaves, tie and boil until it is ready. You can now taste a delicious food from Guatemala, with a cup of coffee.
Enjoy your meal!
Goodbye friends
Antonio!
!Tu hiciste excellente otra vez! Pero hay pequenos errores, no grande cosa.
Tus Errores:
1) For prepared this food. -No es corrected. La palabra prepared this food means it has already been done. This tense is in el pasado.
Debe Ser- To prepare this food.........This is before the food is prepared. What you need to do to make this food.
2) Instead of saying tomato sauce WITH spices, I would say And spices.
3) Tie, boil and ready...I would say tie. boil Until it is ready. -This is more proper in english.
4)La palabra delicius-no es correcto.
Debe ser- DELICIOUS.
5)The sentence enjoy your meal is perfect. I would just add ! for more emphasis to the reader.
ENJOY YOUR MEAL!
You did a wonderful job!!!!!Continue on my friend!
Antonio - bien hecho!
In Guatemala the people make "chuchitos". For To prepared this food you need cornmeal mixed with lard, and tomato sauce with spices. You also need pieces of chicken or pork. You put the ingredients in corncob leaves (o "corn shucks"), tie, boil and when ready, you will taste a delicious typical food from Guatemala with a cup of coffee. Enjoy your meal. Good Bye friends.
Su descripción de "chuchitos" es similar a los tamales mexicanos. Ahora tengo hambre!for prepared=to prepare.
very good quality and style.
The nanheart2's corrections are perfect!
I hope sometime to test 'chuichitos'! :)
Hi Antonio,
You hardly need my review after all of the others' comments, but let me say your writing is very good and I agree with their suggestions.