Describe Your Home Tools
Instructions:
List some tools that you have at home. What are they? Where did you buy them? How often do you use them? What was the last tool you used and why?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 5
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Hello, today is January 10. Today the weather is fresh, don´t raining. In Guatemala there are only 2 seasons: winter but don´t snow, only raining and summer, but the hot in not strong. I thing tomorrow the weather will be same that today (I hope).
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Hello, today is January 10. Today the weather is nice, it is not raining. In Guatemala there are only 2 seasons: winter without any snow, only rain; and summer, but it is not too hot. I think tomorrow the weather will be the same as it is today (I hope).
Hello, today is January 10. Today the weather is nice fresh, it is not don´t raining. In Guatemala there are only 2 seasons: winter but it don´t does not snow only raining, and summer, but The hot weather in is not strong. I think g tomorrow the weather will be same that as today (I hope).
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!Hola Antonio!
Today is January 10,2009. The weather is nice, it is not raining. In Guatemala, there are only two seasons: winter without any snow, only rain. The other season is summer, where the sun is not too hot. I think tomorrow , the weather will be the same as today, (I hope).
Antonio este ejercicio esta bueno, tienes solamente unos errores.
1)Tu no necesitas poner "Hello " antes de "Today."
Debes comenzar con la palabra Today no hello. Necesitas poner el ano 2009 depues del numero. Es mejor en Ingles.
2) la palabra fresh- no es correcto. Tu puedes usar la palabra por el siguiente: . The fruit is fresh.
3) La palabra thing -esta es una cosa. ie: casa, coche, etc. Tu quieres decir- pienso- I think.
4)but the hot is not to strong- tu quieres decir- it is not to hot.
5)will be same- debe ser -will be the same.
!Tu Hiciste excellente! Keep going !!!!!!
Hello Antonio!
Hello! Today is January 10. Today the weather is cool, and it doesn't rain.
In Guatemala are two seasons winter and summer.
In winter is cold but it doesn't snow. It's only raining sometimes.
In summer is hot but not to much. You can call it more warm rather than hot.
I think tomorrow the weather will be the same as it is today. ( I hope)
Come to Chicago and you will have so much snow that you will get tired of it as i did:)
Good job!
Very good, no spelling mistakes, only a few grammatical errors. Here is another way to write this:
Hello, today is January 10. Today the weather is nice and it is not raining. In Guatemala there are only two seasons: winter, when it rains but doesn't snow, and summer, when it is warm but the heat is not too strong. I think tomorrow the weather will be the same as today (I hope).
Buen trabajo, amigo!
Hello, today is January 10th. Today the weather is fresh, don´t it is not raining. In Guatemala there are only 2 seasons: winter but don´t it does not snow, only raining and summer, but the hot wheather in is not strong. I thing think tomorrow the weather will be same that today (I hope).