Describing your day
Instructions:
Using the vocabulary words from this lesson describe your day. What time is it now? What time was it 20 minutes ago? What time did you wake up this morning? What time will you go to bed?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 1
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Usually I went to the cafe at the weekend. I always order a cup of coffee with milk that is my favorite. I do not like sandwich. I ordered never.
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Usually I go to the cafe at the weekend. I always order a cup of coffee with milk ,because that is my favorite. I do not like sandwich. I never ordered it .
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Your friend has already corrected most of your work, I suggest this correction for your exercise:
I do not like a sandwich, and I have never ordered one.
I do not like sandwiches, so I never order one.
Hi Jack W!
I USUALLY GO TO THE CAFÉ AT THE WEEKEND.
In English the adverbs stay between the subject and the verb.
The Subject is who do action. I = subject
Usually is an frequecy adverb
I always order a cup of coffee with milk that is my favorite dirnk. I always order a cup of coffee with milk. It is my favorite drink. or I always order a cup of coffee with milk because that is my favorite drink.
I never ordered sandwich. or I never ordered it.
You forgot the acccent on the word "Café".
Café is a French word but It is frequently in English.
You don't like sandwich. I like sandwich and pastry like apple pai, stroberry pai, cheesecake, chinese pastry.
What do you like in a Café? ...
here is my suggestion
Usually i go to the cafe at the weekend .I always order a cup of coffee with milk which is my favorite drink . I don't order shandwich because i don't like it .
I usually go to the cafe during the weekends. My favorite thing to order is always a cup of coffee with milk. I do no like sandwiches. I never order a sandwich.
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