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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 4

Describe your best friend

Instructions: Describe your best friend using the vocabulary words from this lesson. What does he or she look like? Does he or she have a unique feature? Do you and your friend have similar features? Ex: My friend has blue eyes and broad shoulders. I do not have blue eyes; I have green eyes.

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India is a vast country. It has many popular meals and drinks regionwise. I live in west-Bengal . It is one of the provinces of India.Popular meal of West-Bengal is rice and fish curry also mutton carry. Rice making is easy --simply rice and water is needed. For making fish curry , Ingredients is fish and different types of spicyies are required. There are different types of fish plates . One of the Important dish is elish fish. Ingredients of mutton curry is also simple. Main Ingredient for making mutton curry is mutton and different spicyies . There are many types of drinks. In winter season mainly different fruit juices are popular drink.In summer beside many fruit juices, there is one important popular drink is lassi. Main ingredients are card , sweet and flabour.One common drink is different types of cold drinks such as cock cola, thumps up etc. There are also many types of hot drinks such as beer, whisky, vodak etc.
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  • antazid
    Mochapoints: 6286  |  Teacher Score: 2470 (100%)

    A good story. but;:

    Card? What did you mean?

    flabour.... may be, flaVour.

    And what does it mean - thumps?

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  • dip
    Mochapoints: 7185  |  Teacher Score: 5478

    Hi Antazid, I am gladly received your review. card is made with milk.you are rightly pointed out the spelling mistake.thums is a the name of a cold drink A lot of thanks to you.  Dip

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  • usha
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    Good,But Please check your spellings.

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  • usha
    Mochapoints: 3380  |  Teacher Score: 129 (0%)

    Good,But Please check your spellings.

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  • dip
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    Hi Usha, Thanks to you for right comment.          dip

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  • Lumy
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    Hello Lumy , A lot of thanks to you .

    Submitted over a year ago

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