Your last vacation
Instructions:
Describe your last vacation. Where did you most recently visit on holiday? What activities and attractions can you recommend to other travelers?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 5
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At my last vacation I went france, I really wish to come back someday for vacation I visited the Louvre, but i didn't have time to see the eiffel tower and others cities like marselhe and lyon
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Hi Diego,
here another version:
On my last vacation I went to France, I would really like to go again on vacation one day. I visited the Louvre, but I didn't have time to see the Eiffel Tower and other cities like Marselhe and Lyon
take care
Enrico
Diego tell you what as a friend I liked it but...You need to "cap" places and other than that it was pretty good ☺