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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 6, Lesson 3

Staying at a Hotel

Instructions: Use the vocabulary from this lesson to describe a time you stayed in a hotel. Were you on a business trip or vacation? Did you order room service? Did you use their computers? Did you have breakfast in bed? Etc.

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I did not read any map because I had not to go outside the hotel,
I took my breakfast in the morning inside the hotel. At nights I used the computers of the hotel to surf on the web and of course to talk with my girlfriend. Everyday in the morning, the bed have not been made yet, until the maid came to the room.
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  • Hui Wen
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    not bad
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  • ︴★J※馨♥忆※★E︴
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  • Durita
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    Hey geralive

    Her is my suggestion:

    I did not read any map because I did not go outside the hotel, I took my breakfast in the morning inside the hotel. At nights I used the computers at the hotel to surf on the web and of course to talk with my girlfriend. The bed was not made in the mornings, until the maid came to the room.
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  • YU MA
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    good
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  • Yerly Moreno
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    Durita is fine!
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  • Orange0409
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    kinda ok..
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