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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 1

Describe your clothes

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe what you are wearing right now. What is it made of? How do you usually dress for work? What do you wear when you go to events and parties? What is your favorite outfit?

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When the Tourist cam to visit my city so he will be surprised with the hot weather. So he will go to the Copacaban beach for swimming and watch the nice people going and sitting arrant. On the next day he will make a city tour by foot for visit the last builtings from the colonial time. Go to the Corcovada, the hill where is the Christ Statue and have one very nice outlook of the city. With his bay and the rain forest. Testing typical locate food and drinks.

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  • Cynthia
    Mochapoints: 902  |  Teacher Score: 133 (0%)

    Not bad..may i offer a few suggestion?

    "cam"- should be "come"

    "so he will"- should be "so they will"

     
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