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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 2

Describe People

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe what six people (a man and a woman, he and she, you and I) are doing at this moment and what they did some time ago. Ex: The woman is opening the door. The woman opened the door an hour ago.

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I often go to park on foot, and read some book under the tree.
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  • Dave46
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    I often go to the park on foot, and read a book under a tree.

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    人只要有恒心,就会实现自已的梦想

                                   come on

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