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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 2

Grocery Shopping

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe the groceries that you bought during your last grocery shopping trip. Did you go to one store to buy everything? What was your most expensive item? What was your least expensive item? Did you buy an item that you haven’t tried before? What is one dish that you will be making this week using these groceries?

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My country its colled Brazil and is situeated in South America. It makes border of French Guiana, Surinam, Guyana, Venezuela and Colombia, to the north; Uruguay and Argentina, to the south; and Paraguay, Bolivia and Peru, to west. Ecuador and Chile only countries don't have exchange value with Brazil. It has on east 7.367 km of seafront with the Atlantic Ocean. Ecuador and Chile only countries don’t have exchange value with Brazil
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  • Ilze.polakova
    Mochapoints: 1431  |  Teacher Score: 261 (0%)

    Hello Willi,

    the execise is fine but there are some grammar slips to improve:

    1)called - not colled

    2) and it is situated - the pronound "it" is necessary becouse "and" starts here a new part of a sentence and if you don't mention the name (Brazil) then the pronoun "it" should be used

    3)it makes a border with - not of

    4) Ecuador and Chile are the only tso countires (don't miss the verb and the definite article)

    5) Change the sentence structure:

    It has a 7.367 km seafront with the Atlantic ocean on the East.

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