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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 6, Lesson 2

Giving and Receiving

Instructions: Describe a present you have received. What was it? Who did you get it from? Is there something you gave in return?

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I getting two ties, one blue and one green with white lines in return I give him a brown pulse
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  • Tony
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    I am getting two ties, one blue and one green with white lines.  In return I will give him a brown pulse purse.

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  • Tony
    Mochapoints: 80322  |  Teacher Score: 68461 (99%)

    I am getting two ties, one blue and one green with white lines.  In return I will give him a brown pulse purse.

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  • Sophia
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    Wow Paulino,

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    I received getting two neckties for my birthday from my brother. One tie was blue and the other one was green with white lines.  In return I give him a brown pulse wallet.

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  • julir
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    I getting got two ties, one blue and one green with white lines. In return, I give gave him a brown pulse purse.

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