Describe your street
Instructions:
Look outside of your window and describe the movement that is happening on your street. Which direction are the people and the cars moving? How would a guest reach your home from the street?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 201, Unit 7, Lesson 2
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My favorite restaurant in my town is a sushi shop. I like a raw fish very much. The big university is across the street from it. And a big park which has many horses and a bookstore is next to a sushi shop. I like a raw fish very much, but I like baked fish, too. I eat it in my house almost every day.
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you're so good at this^^
i like sushi too
My favorite restaurant in my town is a sushi shop. I like a raw fish very much. The big university is across the street from it. And Also there is a big park which has many horses, and a bookstore is next to a the sushi shop. I like a raw fish very much, but I also like baked fish too. I eat it in my house almost every day.
Very good! Those are pretty complex sentences! Keep working hard!
Excellent!
My suggestions aren't too different than what's written above.
My favorite restaurant in my town is a sushi shop. I like raw fish very much. The big university is across the street from it. And there is a big park, which has many horses, and a bookstore next to the sushi shop. I like a raw fish very much, but I also like baked fish. I eat it in my house almost every day.
My favorite restaurant in my town is a sushi shop. I like a raw fish very much. The big university is across the street from it. And There is a big park which has many horses and a bookstore is next to a the sushi shop. I like a raw fish very much, but I like baked fish too. I eat it in my house almost every day.
*Great, just some grammar mistakes but don't worry about it. ^_^
Good job Rie!
There is a big park... next to the sushi shop.
Congratulations.