English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 7, Lesson 3

Needs and Wants

Instructions: Compare “need” and “want” in sentences about six people: you and me, a boy and a girl, a man and a woman. Also, use positives and negatives of either “need” or “want” in some of the sentences. Example: I want a car, but I need to finish my college degree. She wants ice cream; she does not want broccoli.

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First, take a subway No.6 forward "Bong Hwa Mountain"
and take off on "Suck-kae" station please.
And you can see my apartment if you go out for No.5-exit,

Cross the pedestrian crossing in front of you,
go straight following a left-sidewalk.
Then you'll meet the repairing shop of car, follwing a right road centering around the shop.
That is it!! You can find my apartment~! =]

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jmsong79

Mochapoints: 402 | Teacher Score: 215 (0%)

Very good overall. The word "toward" would've been better instead of "forward". "Please take No. 6 subway toward Bong Hwa Mountain and take off at Suck-Kae station. You will see my apartment if you walk out from exit No. 5. Cross the street in front of you. Make a left after crossing the street and go straight until you meet an auto repair shop. At the repair shop, follow the road on the right side of the shop. That's it!! You found my apartment~"

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