Describe an area in your city
Instructions:
Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe a busy street in your city. What kind of buildings and businesses are located on this street? Where are they located?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 201, Unit 8, Lesson 4
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First of all, in my profile picture don't appear my hair :) But I have a blond large hair. In summer, it seem blonder than in winter, because the sun.
When I was eighteen years old, I had larger hair than now. Now, I must have short hair because my job.
When I was eighteen years old, I had larger hair than now. Now, I must have short hair because my job.
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First of all, in my profile picture you can't see my hair. But I have long blond hair. In summer, it seems blonder than it does in winter, because of the sun. When I was 18 years old / 18, I had longer hair that I do now.
First of all, in my profile picture YOU CAN'T SEE my hair (or my hair is not showing) But I have LONG blonde hair. In summer, it SEEMS blonder than in winter, because OF the sun. When I was eighteen years old, I had LONGER hair than now. Now, .... very good. buena lectura
but I have a blond hair
because of the sun
because of my job
First of all, in my profile picture my hair doesn't appear :) But I have a long blond hair. In summer, it seems more blond than in winter, because of the sun. When I was eighteen years old, I had a longer hair than now. Now, I have to cut hair because my job.
u can't see my hairs, but i have blond and long hairs. it seems blonder, because of the sun, i had longer hairs.i have to cut my hair short....
good!!!!