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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 1

Describing your day

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson describe your day. What time is it now? What time was it 20 minutes ago? What time did you wake up this morning? What time will you go to bed?

Maggie's submission: Average Rating:
My favorite drink is coffee. I love coffee and cream. And here in Brazil we usually eat brad with ham and cheese. It calls ¨misto quente¨. My favourite sandwich.
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  • Denisaugusto
    Mochapoints: 839  |  Teacher Score: 78 (0%)

    Hello Maggie!

    I would like to say that I have the same taste for café services!

    Could I give you some advice? 

    You could write "bread" instead of "brad". And "They call" is a better expression (more usual) than "It calls". Because of that are the braziliian people who named it.

    That´s it! Nice text!

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  • Maggie
    Mochapoints: 1544  |  Teacher Score: 62 (0%)

    Denis, thank you so much for reviewing my lesson and for the advice.

    Submitted over a year ago

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